Dawn that animal!

This is story I wanna tell you! the most ugly people in Holland! He's using his girl to steal the money, to lends the money from others.  I never seen such guy, maybe u can better call him a shit. Still he said something bahind me, I don't care about it, because I got enough friends. but it's so pitiful for that girl! I don't say the name here, because he is not belong to human.

Everyone c'mon here to say it, are you human if you using you girl!>?????

说中文比较明白一些。。。

给lz个中肯的建议： 练好英文再来发帖。。。。。

Post by one_ST;1888798
给lz个中肯的建议： 练好英文再来发帖。。。。。

楼主应该多学学从句的运用和联结词和副词的使用， 清一色短剧， 只有写小说复述没人说话才这样用哦。 两句短句， 把后面的那个放到前面来加上习惯用法就是从句啦，这样看上去通顺而且明了。 不要用中文的句式直译。

LZ想说什么呢？

我猜是这样：
a的女朋友认识b，a让他女朋友跟b借钱然后不还。然后a说b坏话，b就说a不是人类

Post by 自在寒武纪;1889238
我猜是这样：
a的女朋友认识b，a让他女朋友跟b借钱然后不还。然后a说b坏话，b就说a不是人类

有道理，hoho

故事大体理解,这标题啥意思?

Dawn?   Damn?? 没看明白啊...楼主练习英文的精神可嘉