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Motivation Letter The tourism industry has been in my blood for as long as I can remember. I started the exploration into this industry through the influence of my father. It was his passion for life and dreams that supported him to succeed both as a father and as a successful chairman of a first-class five star hotel. My family has owned the Novotel Wuhan Xinhua for more than 9 years. And for as long as I can remember, I have helped in every aspect of it often living, eating and sleeping there. It became my second home. Step by step, my interest in this magical world has been inspired. After serious consideration, I decided to enrich my knowledge so that I could become a person as excellent as my father and continue to improve this wonderful hotel that my family is so proud to have developed into the future.
Passion is to life what sunlight is to the earth. Luckily, I have possessed both of them over the past 19 years. As I grow in life experiences and gain more insight into the hotel industry, my roots are firmly planted in wanting to pursue my dream. With my inner passion, I am clear on my future direction. I am delighted to say that my future study of hotel management in your school would be a great stride in my pursuit on this journey. Also, as china opens and becomes more popular with foreign tourists. I can see my country developing into one of the greatest for both incoming and outgoing tourism in the future. People are becoming more affluent and conscious of service and quality and I want to satisfy this demand.
To be competent and prepare for my further education, I have made great efforts in my academic work with totally enthusiasm.Taking the initiative to improve my English, I got the certificate of College English Test Band 4. Due to the influence of my father, I cultivated a special sensitivity for people’s requirements. I have traveled to a lot of places, during which I always observed their hotels. Every time whilst visiting a different city, I would analyze factors such as location, service and management. I have been to Sanya, which is an island in the south of China. It made me feel as if I was in paradise with its stylish and special architectures, exotic flavors, the positioning by the sea and its near perfect service.
In relation to my study, theory is not enough, hands-on experience teaches much more. I spent many of my vacations doing varied jobs to gain valuable working experience. From July to October in 2010, I worked on the concierge, taking charge of delivering luggage to our valued guests' rooms. I often met many different foreigners and communicated with them, and it really enhanced my confidence and my interpersonal relationships. Having worked in a five star hotel, I was very conscious that I had to provide excellent service and I was proud to be able to assist many of our visitors who have never been to Wuhan before with their plans when touring the many famous attractions in my city. This way significantly helped to improve my English and communication skills. This was extremely enjoyable and very rewarding, being able to make the guests feel at home relaxed and in a comfortable environment. Apart from my hotel training, I engaged the services of a private personal tutor, an English man from Manchester, who was a hotel major and was rich in knowledge of hotel management. He allowed me to be a trainee teacher in his school afterwards as he was so impressed with my attitude and English level. From my past experience, I chose with his agreement to change the traditional way of teaching and created a new way which was based on the different characteristics and needs of each student.
I believed that learning is a lifelong process. However knowledgeable you are about this industry, it is so dynamic and changing so rapidly and I am eager to be part of its changes. The Hotelschool in the Hague is renowned to be one of the leading Hotel schools in the world. Small, independent, and associated to the Leading Hotels of The World Organization with many of its students achieving leading management jobs in hospitality once graduating. I was inspired to learn the variety of techniques to teach the students not only theory but also practical courses through internship. I believe that should I be given the opportunity to accomplish the next part of my journey at your school. I would grasp this with full passion and commitment, and I hope together to make my objectives become reality and my dream come true.
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Motivation Letter
I ever asked myself about what I should do in future. At present time, rising population reveals that more and more people will be served, and increasing living standard allows a large number of people to travel around world, therefore, hospitality, as one important part of service industry, has an inevitable trend and promising future. It’s not only providing a comfortable place for tourists, but also giving them the feeling like home. This is a meaningful and fabulous industry that I want to devote myself to. Having traveled to many places with my parents, I have seen and lived in several hotels and realized that excellent service would bring relaxation, sound management could make it operated in good order. To do a good job in management and to make guests satisfied is not easy. So I want to study in a professional school to enrich my knowledge of management as well as enhance my ability of communication and observation. I have made great efforts in my academic work with totally enthusiasm in high school Wuhan Foreign Language School, which is a provincial key high school in Wuhan City and where I acquired good command of English. I was Merit Student during 2008-2009. Besides, I got the certificate of College English Test Band 4 as early as in 2008 and Spoken English Level 3. what I did is to make preparation for studying in your program with outstanding English.
Thanks to my father who runs a five star hotel for many years, he always talks with me about his business. Under such atmosphere, my interest in this industry has been aroused. I spent my vacation in doing some practice to get hands-on experience. From July to August in 2010, I worked on the concierge, taking charge of delivering luggage to our valued guests’ room. Sometimes I met some foreign guests, whom I could communication with in English and take the pleasure of introducing famous scenery in Wuhan to. It really enhanced my confidence and interpersonal relationship. Making a perfect arrangement for customers gave me the sense of satisfaction and self-fulfillment. For me, it was what I should do and for them, they got warm reception that added flavor into their journey.I always saw my father busy with his business. Being the chairman of the hotel, he dealt with many issues and negotiated with kinds of people, which called for good skills in communication and high competence to solve varieties of problems. During spare time I have traveled so many times and I am impressed by the hotel in Hainan. Its stylish and special architectures, exotic flavors, the positioning by the sea and its near perfect service leave me a good impression. I also find that the different departments could operate in harmony. If a hotel with an excellent outlook and perfect service can be operated well, I do believe that such kind of hotel will be welcomed to all. That’s what
I want to establish in my future.
In leisure time, fashion design, taking photographs are regarded as my hobbies to improve my aesthetic vision which was very essential. Besides I did some other things to improve myself in creation. I had been a trainee teacher in Gary’s (he is my tutor who was a hotel major and was rich in knowledge of hotel management) school.I chose with his agreement to change the traditional way of teaching and created a new way which was based on the different characteristics and needs of each student.This kind of change makes study more effective.
There is no end in the learning process. No matter how knowledgeable you are about this industry, it is so dynamic and changing so rapidly and I am eager to be part of its changes. The Hague is one of the leading hotel schools in the world. Theory and practical weeks will be subject to frequent alteration, in which way we can combine the theory with practice closely. The most important point is that most of students in Hague find a job within a year in some leading management position in the hospitality and related industries, which indicate that students graduated from Hague, have a bright and promising future. Thus, I do believe, with my excellent oral English, outstanding communication skills and flexible mind, I should be given the opportunity to accomplish the next part of my journey at your school, I would grasp this with full passion and commitment, and I hope together to make my objectives become reality and my dream come true.
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